last moments…. of a wonderful life…

Picture this….. 

An old man with signs of a slight paunch, a respectable face and kind eyes behind sophisticated glasses. He sits there by the side of a beautiful lake, on the wet grass spotted with beautiful flowers. Butterflies hover around with an air of wonderful silence as he looks at the pink sun that threatens to set.
Wishing for the day to last just a little longer, he adoringly looks at the lady who has spent a lifetime with him lying down on his lap. His love for most of his life, who he had always and yet not ever. Time has taken its toll and the soft wrinkles on her face each tell a story.
Yet to him she is always adorable and he never tires telling her “she is the most beautiful girl in his eyes”. She rests where she belongs reading a nice little book that this bloke wrote years back. Each page leafed a hundred times atleast and yet she never tires. He says “talk to me sweetheart, we don’t have enough time”
She puts the book down, gives him her breathtaking smile as she says “its a lovely book, its been you to me when you were not around”


9 Responses to last moments…. of a wonderful life…

  1. Rashmi says:

    Really a gud one:-)

  2. ~ V ~ says:

    thanks da šŸ™‚

  3. Narayya says:

    For me, It is like a cold breeze in the desert….

  4. ~ V ~ says:

    @narayya for how long? šŸ˜‰

  5. sarba says:

    hmm.. really subtle.. well written

  6. Narayya says:

    Till you keep on writing šŸ™‚

  7. ~ V ~ says:

    @sarba thnq@narayya šŸ˜€

  8. Neha says:

    Your blog was referred to me by my dear friend Sarba. Really a nice one. You write really really good.

  9. ~ V ~ says:

    @neha thank you very much šŸ™‚ just bookmarked your blog as well…

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